- The voice over was a little too long for the footage.
- They really like the message of the voice over because thats what gave the film narrative, also thought that the actual dialogue used was very clearly worded.
- Most of the shots were long shots, and the close up that we did have were a little to blunt, because it was just the actress staring into the camera.
- Thought that we used a variety of shot types, which made the footage more visually appealing.
- Thought that the mise-en-scene worked really well and was constructed well, and all of the audience said that they really like the location.
After getting this feedback it was decided that we needed to go and re-shoot. To do this i drew up new story boards, and decided which shots to cut from the old footage. After getting the new footage, and editing it in with the old one, it became the final film opening.
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